Sunday, February 7, 2010

Poem(:

Bonjour, my adoring Bloggers :)

Just wrote a poem, really, really bad :D But trying to put a name on it and can't decide, thought I'd ask you crazy loves

Just a free verse, no special outline. Here it goes

You are the torn mountain, crimson terrain
I have no doubts, your name, your face.
I am a French Aphrodite, with my broken glass.
You are the Spanish Hermes, whispers and delight
Never set eyes on you, tearing away my sight.
In the majesty of your wink, I have known.
You are my song.

Please help me with a title, and keep your nasty comments to yourself :)

xoxo Carly

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